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50 Ways To Kill Your Character

An excerpt from an unpublished novel by L.L. Abbott


“Janis then flung the rock into the depths of the water below.

She looked down at her feet where Joe lay just moments ago and

kicked the dirt to break up the streaks of blood that began to soak

the ground where Joe fell. Double checking with her flashlight to

ensure she removed any trace of a struggle.

She stood at the top of the cliff for a few minutes before she

turned to leave. The others would be looking for her soon.

But first, she had to take care of the boat.”


From an unpublished novel by L.L. Abbott


Ah…let me count the ways!


Whether it is to write a character out of a story, add intrigue to an existing plot or to use as the center focus for your Mystery Novel – killing a character is a common method for most mystery and thriller writers.


Why? “Because it is so final!” Kate yelled out. A keen friend and an important sounding board when I am in the need to bounce ideas off a friend who won’t worry about my malevolent motives – she never holds back.


When you need to draw a reader into your story you need to have them care about finding out what happened, and it is even better if they can relate to the character. That also can include the murderer.


In an unpublished work, I focused on a common theme (tension at summer cottages and secrets hidden among friends and family) and twisted in a murder (or two) to keep things interesting. Relating the reader to the character that is murdered is a great way to pull the reader into the story because they care about solving the murder and bringing the killer to justice.


But what if the reader relates more to the murderer? Now the writer has created a conflict for the reader. Not only does the reader want to see justice at the end of the novel, but they may also see the point of view of the killer. Maybe a little too easily. Who does the reader end up cheering for? I guess that depends on how each character is portrayed in the novel.


Whenever I finish a book readers ask me if any of the characters were drawn from people I know. My answer is always the same: “People are the greatest inspiration and imagination the greatest muse.” No one person is exemplified in stories, although there are times where I will use personality traits of people I admire when creating a protagonist, but never to malign. But, then again, the mystery of writing and writers, is you never know.



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